FFfAW- The Statue’s Story

Posted: November 3, 2015 by J.A. Prentice in Flash Fiction
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This is my entry for this week’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Check out some of the other stories by following the link. I’d also like to point out that it took tremendous willpower to make this story not be about the Weeping Angels from Doctor Who.

Photo prompt provided by Sonya, Author of the blog ‘Only 100 Words.’

When I heard the story, I was huddled around the fire with my battalion in the ruins of the city.  I could see the statue from there, its wings outstretched.

“You know,” Bastiel, one of my brothers-in-arms, said, “there’s an old legend about that statue.”

I was in desperate need of anything to distract from the cold. “Tell me.”

“It was carved by a blind sculptor,” Bastilel replied. “He was possessed by a vision and obsessed with showing the world what he’d seen. After he made the final cut, he said ‘it is done.’ He died at once. Some say that the statue has great supernatural power. Even as the city was shaken by fire and war, it was safe.”

I looked at the statue. The idea of it being supernatural seemed absurd.

Then I noticed something.

Everything else was covered in snow, but the statue remained untouched.

  1. Wonderful story! I love that it has a legend in it. That is wonderful that the statue has supernatural powers. Lovely story!

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  2. mandibelle16 says:

    A touch of the supernatural, the statue remains protected while everything else in ruins. Good story.

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  3. fixoffiction says:

    Haha weeping angels. That came to my mind too.

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  4. GG says:

    I love the string of hope even with death and destruction all around. Nicely done.

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  5. Deb says:

    Ooooh, that last line gave me goosebumps!!! Very creative story, enjoyed reading it!

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