FFfAW– A Surprising Legacy

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Teal paint – the soft blue-green of a calm sea – covered the wooden door. Red and green crawled over the brickwork, reminding Jack of Christmas. His fingers brushed the window and he closed his eyes, lost in memory.

He stepped back and took a deep breath. He knew what he needed to do. The key felt heavy in his hand, even though it was small enough to fit snugly in his palm.

Jack put the key in the lock and turned it. The door creaked open, bidding him enter this strange new world.

It was his father’s key, his father’s shed, his father’s secrets. But his father was gone now.

As the light spilled across strange books, copper tubes, marble column and flashing lights, Jack stood in awe and wonder.

He’d known his father all his life, but now he realized he’d never known him at all.


 

Word Count: 146

This is my entry for this week’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Thanks to Priceless Joy for running the challenge! The picture is from pixabay.com.

18 thoughts on “FFfAW– A Surprising Legacy

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  1. Isn’t that one of the ironies of life indeed, when we think we know the people we’re close to, only to find out later that there were so many layers to them we had never discovered. Great story 🙂

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  2. Neat story. A lot of tension and build up to the time the son opens the door. I’m not sure what his father was doing, but it must have been amazing for the son to realize he didn’t know his father at all.

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    1. Thank you! My intention – which I guess wasn’t as clear as I’d hoped – was that there was strange sci-fi-looking stuff inside, implying his father was some sort of inventor or time traveller or alien. But the story seems to work even if I didn’t get that across.

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      1. Oh, I see. I thought something to do with Science. I just didn’t know exactly what. But yes your story worked. I thought the mystery of not knowing what the father was was intentional. And it made the story mysterious.

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