The jewel gave off a deep purple glow that seemed to consume the entire cavern. It played across the curving rock walls, the twisting tunnels, and the large, almost ape-like statue, carved into the stone. Celeste’s heart beat in her chest like it was a drum in the hands of a hyperactive four-year-old.
This was far from the most dangerous task she’d ever undertaken.It was certainly nothing compared to Atlantis. But there was something in the cold air, in the strange glow, in the eerie and nameless statue, buried deep in the earth, that made her blood run cold as ice.
Focus on the mission, she told herself. Just get the jewel and leave.
She reached out a hand for it, her fingers sliding over the luminescent surface. Carefully, she began to lift it from its resting place.
The statue turned its head to fix her with two stone eyes.
Word Count: 150
This is for Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer. Thanks to Priceless Joy for running the challenge and Jade M. Wong for providing the prompt photo!
It’s also a sequel of sorts to my Quest for Atlantis serial. Check that out if you want more Celeste!
Oooouuu great story! Chilling ending! Loved how you made it so mysterious!
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Oooohhh! what a climax! Loved it!
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Oooh lovely. Send for Indiana!
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Thanks! Unfortunately, Indiana’s busy finally grading those essays he kept postponing to go on adventures.
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Lol!
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I thought Indiana Jones too, I assume there follows an action packed escape through a series of traps! Excellent writing.
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An action packed escape is almost certainly what follows. Celeste, like most people, tries to escape when confronted by moving statues. Thank you!
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Love the suspense!
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Brilliantly written 🙂 Love the whole buildup.
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Ooh it’s always the statue you have to look out for! Lol this was super engaging to read, and I’m hooked. Fantastic job!
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Great build up to a very chilling ending. I’d say Celeste needs to get out of there fast! The ‘Guardian of the Jewel’ will probably be pulling away from the stone wall very soon and I’ll bet he packs quite a punch.
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Thanks! I think Celeste will definitely be trying to get out as fast as she can.
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Love that you brought this charscter back. Now I want to know what the stone figure fixing his eyes and Celeste taking the diamond means. Great write!
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Thank you! I’d definitely be interested in exploring this story further. Maybe when I’m a little less swamped.
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Looking forward to it!
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Ooh, nice cliffhanger, very creepy! 🙂
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A beautifully described story, JA. 🙂 I love the cliffhanger ending!
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Ooh, eerie ending.
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Ooh! I love suspense
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