Tranquility

Posted: January 5, 2017 by J.A. Prentice in Flash Fiction
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road

The road wound like a snake over the treetops. A soft wind blew through the leaves. It was a lonely spot, tranquil and serene.

The cars raced in, streaks of red and blue, tires etched black trails into the road, engines roaring and squealing. The trees quivered like frightened children.

Eve’s foot was pressed to the floor; her messy blonde curls were pinned to her forehead with sweat. Her empty holster pressed into her side as she swung her car into another turn.

She saw her pursuer leaning out through the window, firing a handgun whilst keeping her other hand on the steering wheel. Black hair trailed over a scar and piercing eyes.

A bullet struck the body of Eve’s car, a black mark ripping through the paintwork. Eve knew that it could easily have hit the tires or the engine – or the back of her head.

The cars raced out of sight just as swiftly as they’d entered, passing beyond the line of trees and the curve of the road. The roars of their engines faded into the distance and it seemed as if every tree breathed a sigh of relief as all became silent and tranquil once more.


Word Count: 200

This is for Flash Fiction for Purposeful Practitioner. Thanks to rogershipp for running the challenge!

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Comments
  1. Nice scary twists and turns. A very good attempt.

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  2. rogershipp says:

    “The road wound like a snake over the treetops. ” Wow! What a great picture with words!!

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  3. mandibelle16 says:

    Intense car chase situation on such a windy road. Very James Bond esq in some of the earlier movies. I hope your speaker escapes!

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  4. athling2001 says:

    Great circular motion from beginning to end.

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  5. Singledust says:

    Trees are caught between warring forces once again and all they can do is stand still, wonder how many times a day they get nervous like that, no wonder they drop their leaves in autumn.

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