Ian Thorn was happy with his reputation as the finest mind in England, his impressive number of completed cases, and the money that piled up in his bank account. What he could live without were the bodies.
It was all right at first. His clients came in and he solved their murders. But then he found a man stabbed to death on the Underground during his morning commute. A visit to his brother’s house in the country revealed a secret Satanic cult.
Solving mysteries was all very good, but he preferred not to have his work follow him home.
“Take a vacation,” his friend, Inspector Banks, said. “Try the beach.”
So Thorn went to the beach. He walked the golden sands, watching sunlight play over clear waters, a salty breeze in his face.
And then he found it, floating in the shallows.
He sighed. There was another case to solve.
Word Count: 150
This is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Thanks to Priceless Joy for running the challenge and Louise for providing the prompt photo!
Very beautifully set up.
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I hate it when work follows me home. But his case seems fishy. Is he somehow responsible for these tragedies happening around him, I wonder.
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I was parodying the typical detective who seems to find mysteries wherever he or she goes. But I suppose it could be interpreted in a darker way.
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That makes much more sense. Great take on a prompt!
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law of attraction …hmm …
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hmm …law of attraction …
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haha just the right place …and the time for the next case !!
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However much he might wish it wasn’t. Thanks for commenting!
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Ha excellent. Definitely a problem with ongoing detective characters, how they seem to attract murder. There’s a long running TV series Midsomer Murders, where the body count in a sleepy rural village in England is into the hundreds π
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Thank you! I think every sleepy rural village in English mysteries seems to have a higher crime rate than Detroit.
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Every time I watch Morse/Lewis/Endeavour I can’t help but feel that not that many people get murdered in Oxford.
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Death follows him like an old companion.
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One he just wishes would leave him alone.
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Seems this detective has his hands full even on a vacation. Sigh.
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That’s the price you pay for being good at your job, it seems. π Thanks for commenting!
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All the best detectives seem to take their work on holiday with them! We always joke that when any of these (Poirot, Marple, Morse, etc) arrives at a place, everyone else should leave, because death is sure to follow. Great story, JA. π
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Thank you! I think if Poirot showed up anywhere near me, I’d leave as soon as I possibly could.
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A great story. I like the name. Could be the next great detective name everyone talks about.
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Thank you! I like the name too. Maybe I’ll use it for something else.
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Poor guy. Just can’t get away. Reminds me of quite a few of the detective series in print.
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I was parodying the detective genre in general, so those similarities were definitely intentional.
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Welcome!
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I really enjoyed the way this unfolded, easy like a Summer breeze. Nicely told.
Sands of Time
Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~
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Nicely done! I’ve heard of people taking their work home with them (I sure did!) but this poor guy can’t even go on vacation without “work” floating before his eyes! π
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…and there goes his vacation. Wonderful write up.
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