Ash piled high over racked concrete, splintering rafters, rotting furniture. As far as Jared Thomas looked, there was nothing but grey.
“Look upon what you have wrought,” the woman said, her face hidden behind shining steel. “This is your legacy.”
Jared bent down to see a photograph of a girl and her mother, trodden underfoot and coated in dust. He wondered if there was anyone left.
“I never wanted this,” he said.
“You did not care before you beheld it with your own eyes.”
“I can change,” Jared said. “Please. Take me back. I can change!”
The woman said nothing.
Word Count: 100
This is for Friday Fictioneers. Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for running the challenge and J. Hardy Carrol for providing the prompt photo!
That was one hell of a lovers’ spat to have such a scene of destruction!
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Wouldn’t it be great if such ghosts could show some political leaders or even terrorists the future they are bringing about. That would stop most of them I’m sure.
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There are quite a few who could do with a lot at the world they’re making.
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A lot left to imagine here. You’ve opened with a good scene. I’d like to know more.
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Could be an arms dealer faced with the legacy of the goods they sell. Sadly, I’m pretty sure most of them know exactly what the outcome of their trade is and keep on selling anyway.
Well written and sad tale
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Thank you! Arms dealer fits well with the story.
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I hope the Manchester bomber – and all the others before him – face similar judgement.
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Sadly, I don’t know if that would stop them.
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You portrayed a dystopian future very well. I could hear the desperation in his voice. Nice topical take on the prompt.
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Thank you!
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I’m pretty sure there isn’t going to be another chance.
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The title suggests there might be – but not everyone gets another chance.
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Sadly I believe too many who kill innocent human beings know full well what evil they are doing. Your story line is so well written.
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Thank you! And sadly I feel that’s entirely true.
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Oh my. What has he done?
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Perhaps it’s what he’s going to do…
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