photo-20170724154621263

Roger sighed. He had been promised gold, but all he’d seen were enough rocks to last him a lifetime and an expanse of cold, grey-green ocean.

After hours of searching the rugged shorelines of the islands, treasure still seemed to be in short supply.

He turned to Marie, who was scrutinizing the worn fragments of map with pursed lips and furrowed brow.

“Time to turn back, I think,” he said. “Storm’s coming in.”

Marie shook her head. “No. My great-grandfather’s treasure is out here somewhere.”

“He probably spent it all on rum,” Roger said. “I know I would. My point is–”

“There!” Marie pointed. “That’s it! Raven’s Point.”

The outcrop was just like the shape on the map: a rough outline of a raven’s beak extending over the waters.

And beneath, there was a cave.

Marie smiled.

“Full speed ahead.”


Word Count: 140

This is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Thanks to Priceless Joy for running the challenge and Louise for providing the photo prompt!

Comments
  1. Mike says:

    I love nautical stories –

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Great treasure hunt story! Loved the spin you gave the prompt! Hope they find the treasure!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Reena Saxena says:

    Wow! Success at last!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. I wouldn’t mind finding myself some treasure too! Great story!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. marja says:

    Love it the excitement that the treasure can be found

    Liked by 1 person

  6. yarnspinnerr says:

    Its after a long time I read a TH story. Great narration.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. A great TH story. Good one, Martin.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Time to get the gold. Wonderful.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Martin Cororan says:

    Why is there ALWAYS rum!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Iain Kelly says:

    A nice throwback to pirate adventure – I would like to read the story of their great-grandfather and how the treasure came to be at Raven’s Point!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Varad says:

    I would love to see Roger’s reaction if they find the cave empty. Good, fun little adventure tale this one is.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. A treasure story! Nice.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Yea! Fantastic – go get it! Brilliant little tale and I love it.

    Click to read my FFfAW

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Joy Pixley says:

    Roger makes for a pretty impatient treasure hunter — searching for something that’s been hidden for decades and he expects to find it, what, in the first five minutes? I hope Marie didn’t promise him half of her rightful bounty!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Sandi says:

    And the treasure would be stuck like the diamond in the cave/blowhole like in the Rescuers – Penny being forced to go into and get the Devils Eye!

    Liked by 1 person

  16. athling2001 says:

    Great story. I’ve always wanted to go on a real treasure hunt.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. mandibelle16 says:

    Very neat tale. Makes me think of the movie ‘Fools Gold’ with Kate Hudson and Matthew McConaughey. I hope they are able to get the treasure before the tide fills the cave or something like that. It’s what I picture anyways πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  18. The finish made me smile. Hope they got the treasure πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply to J.A. Prentice Cancel reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s