Jumping Too Far

Posted: January 9, 2019 by J.A. Prentice in Flash Fiction
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Verity hangs in the air, gravity tugging, orange curls flaring behind her, the deep water so far below and she remembers what her mother said: “Never jump unless you know you’ll land on your feet.”

But the rocks were placed so perfectly, one after the next, each just a little further, the waters between them a little darker, until at last she jumped and knew she wouldn’t make it.

The waters give way, tearing like silk, and she falls on, down into another sky, strange wind on her face, song in her ears, and a kaleidoscope of stars in her eyes.


This is for Three Line Tales. Thanks to Sonya for running the challenge and Nattu Adnan for providing the prompt photo!

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Comments
  1. Reena Saxena says:

    What a romantic narration of meeting one’s end!

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  2. I like this. Sounds to me as though she’s dropped into another world. Maybe not death. I like to this so anyway.

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  3. Beautifully done. I think we all end like this, with so much peace and heavenliness.

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