Glass roses sung like wind chimes in the morning breeze, crystalline stems trembling. The sun shone a brilliant gold and the cloud-marbled sky gleamed.
A bee buzzed by, clockwork wings carrying a wire-striped body, and alighted on long needle legs. In the sky the birds circled, watching with glinting eyes and knife-sharp beaks.
And in the crooked tower upon the hill, the metal man watched his creation unfold, his long copper fingers tapping like a typewriter. On his world he had been alone, an outcast in a world made of meat.
Here, in this wonderland he had made, he belonged.
Word Count: 100
This is for Friday Fictioneers. Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for running the challenge and providing the prompt photo!
I hope, for his sake, that it’s to his liking in ways that count. Those other worlds can be nasty
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I hope so as well. Thanks for commenting!
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I loved the bee
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How surprising and unusual! I had to read it through again, because I went too fast the first time and missed important parts. Descriptive, beautiful, and somewhat melancholy.
“A world made of meat.” A different perspective, indeed.
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Like a scene from a fairytale. Nice one.
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Very descriptive. Beautiful writing.
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Dear J.A.
I could relate to the artist inside his own world. Lovely descriptions.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Lovely descriptive writing of a ‘God’ and his creation.
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A world made of meat… now you put it like that… I can see he’s happier now.
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Totally contented in a world of his own making. Excellent.
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Wonderful imagery and creative piece!
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You’ve created something beautiful, haunting, and more than a little disquieting with this story. The sharpness of your description lifts the story to the level of art. “An outcast in a world made of meat” is a wonderful phrase!
Wow! Well done!
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Wow very good. The word clockwork at first did not seem to belong: it had me perplexed, wondering how to compare the bee’s wings to the mechanics of a clock–until i realized you were being literal! “A world made of meat” is golden.
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