Rider sits in the dark and listens to the click-clack of the wheels, to the heaving of the engine. He was born here, with the rhythm of the rails in his soul.
They were all born on the train. Some are the descendants of drivers, of firemen, of conductors or passengers. Most are the children of stowaways, who leapt at the train as it left the station, the city burning behind them.
Rider looks out the window and wonders if there is anyone else out there in the grey desolation or if it is just them, alone in endless night.
Word Count: 100
This is for Friday Fictioneers. Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for running the challenge and Jennifer Pendergast for providing the prompt photo!
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Great dystopian imagery, I could feel the desolation.
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We imagined similar trains
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Beautifully written. Sad state of affairs!
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🙂
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Dear Josh,
Quite an existence. Intriguing piece.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Were there such people? An atmospheric piece indeed.
Here’s mine!
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Desolation is exactly the right word. Incredible mood you’ve set here.
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Oh yes. Your story delivers the emotion quite well. Enjoyed it.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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This made me wonder; is loneliness a choice?
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I’m not sure. I suppose it can be. I wouldn’t say it always is.
Thanks for commenting!
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Reminds me of the ark when they had been at sea for so long. I felt acute loneliness emanating from your story. I hope there are more survivors out there.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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